15421: Improve wording

Arvados-DCO-1.1-Signed-off-by: Peter Amstutz <pamstutz@veritasgenetics.com>

diff --git a/doc/api/methods/groups.html.textile.liquid b/doc/api/methods/groups.html.textile.liquid
index 6a7e0c7d3c4037094ad879767586667e670d2be6..2653cccd5d257d74d2319d3c1da317b32389b84c 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/api/methods/groups.html.textile.liquid
+++ b/doc/api/methods/groups.html.textile.liquid
@@ -44,8 +44,6 @@ h3. contents
 
 Retrieve a list of items owned by the group.  Use "recursive" to list objects within subprojects as well.
 
-When called with "include=owner_uuid" this also returns (in the @included@ field of the response) the objects (users, projects, or other groups) that own the objects returned in @items@.  This can be used to fetch an object and the record of the parent project in a single API call.
-
 Arguments:
 
 table(table table-bordered table-condensed).
@@ -56,11 +54,16 @@ table(table table-bordered table-condensed).
 |filters|array|Conditions for filtering items.|query|@[["uuid", "is_a", "arvados#job"]]@|
 |recursive|boolean (default false)|Include items owned by subprojects.|query|@true@|
 |exclude_home_project|boolean (default false)|Only return items which are visible to the user but not accessible within the user's home project.  Use this to get a list of items that are shared with the user.  Uses the logic described under the "shared" endpoint.|query|@true@|
-|include|string|If provided with the value "owner_uuid", this will return owner objects in the "included" field of the response.|query|?include=owner_uuid|
+|include|string|If provided with the value "owner_uuid", this will return owner objects in the "included" field of the response.|query||
+
+Notes:
+
+Because adding access tokens to manifests can be computationally expensive, the @manifest_text@ field is not included in listed collections.  If you need it, request a "list of collections":{{site.baseurl}}/api/methods/collections.html with the filter @["owner_uuid", "=", GROUP_UUID]@, and @"manifest_text"@ listed in the select parameter.
 
-Note: Because adding access tokens to manifests can be computationally expensive, the @manifest_text@ field is not included in listed collections.  If you need it, request a "list of collections":{{site.baseurl}}/api/methods/collections.html with the filter @["owner_uuid", "=", GROUP_UUID]@, and @"manifest_text"@ listed in the select parameter.
+Use filters with the attribute format @<item type>.<field name>@ to filter items of a specific type. For example: @["container_requests.state", "=", "Final"]@ to filter @container_requests@ where @state@ is @Final@. All other types of items owned by this group will be unimpacted by this filter and will still be included.
+
+When called with “include=owner_uuid”, the @included@ field of the response is populated with users, projects, or other groups that own the objects returned in @items@.  This can be used to fetch an object and its parent with a single API call.
 
-Note: Use filters with the attribute format @<item type>.<field name>@ to filter items of a specific type. For example: @["container_requests.state", "=", "Final"]@ to filter @container_requests@ where @state@ is @Final@. All other types of items owned by this group will be unimpacted by this filter and will still be included.
 
 h3. create
 
@@ -136,8 +139,6 @@ h3. shared
 
 This endpoint returns the toplevel set of groups to which access is granted through a chain of one or more permission links rather than through direct ownership by the current user account.  This is useful for clients which wish to browse the list of projects the user has permission to read which are not part of the "home" project tree.  Similar behavior is also available with the @exclude_home_project@ option of the "contents" endpoint.
 
-When called with "include=owner_uuid" this also returns (in the @included@ field) the objects that own those projects (users or non-project groups).
-
 Specifically, the logic is:
 
 <pre>
@@ -147,8 +148,12 @@ select groups that are readable by current user AND
      the owner_uuid is a group but group_class is not a project)
 </pre>
 
-In addition to the "include" parameter this endpoint also supports the same parameters as the "list method.":{{site.baseurl}}/api/methods.html#index
-
 table(table table-bordered table-condensed).
 |_. Argument |_. Type |_. Description |_. Location |_. Example |
-|include|string|If provided with the value "owner_uuid", this will return owner objects in the @included@ field of the response.|query|?include=owner_uuid|
+|include|string|If provided with the value "owner_uuid", this will return owner objects in the @included@ field of the response.|query||
+
+Notes:
+
+When called with “include=owner_uuid”, the @included@ field of the response is populated with users and non-project groups that own the objects returned in @items@.
+
+In addition to the "include" parameter this endpoint also supports the same parameters as the "list method.":{{site.baseurl}}/api/methods.html#index