2380: windows instuctions in a separate page

diff --git a/doc/user/getting_started/ssh-access-windows.html.textile.liquid b/doc/user/getting_started/ssh-access-windows.html.textile.liquid
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--- a/doc/user/getting_started/ssh-access-windows.html.textile.liquid
+++ b/doc/user/getting_started/ssh-access-windows.html.textile.liquid
@@ -98,6 +98,6 @@ h3. Connecting to the VM
 # Click Load to load those saved session settings.
 # Click Open to open the SSH window at the command prompt. You will now be logged into your virtual machine.
 
-_Note_: If you see a blank terminal window that just hangs: open a new terminal window and type <code>plink -P 2222 turnout@switchyard.qr1hi.arvadosapi.com shell</code> in it. Hit enter and type _y_ when prompted to cache the session state. Go back and start PuTTY session using the start menu button.
+_Note_: If you see a hung terminal window with no futher action: open a new terminal window and type <code>plink -P 2222 turnout@switchyard.qr1hi.arvadosapi.com shell</code> in it. Hit enter and type _y_ when prompted to cache the session state. Go back and start PuTTY session using the start menu button.
 
 You should now be able to log into the Arvados VM and "check your environment.":check-environment.html