Make sure examples work, lots of wordsmithing and reorganizing for clarity.

[arvados.git] / doc / user / tutorials / tutorial-keep-mount-os-x.html.textile.liquid

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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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 navsection: userguide
-title: "Accessing Keep from OS X"
+title: "Access Keep from OS X Finder"
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 {% comment %}
 Copyright (C) The Arvados Authors. All rights reserved.
@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@ SPDX-License-Identifier: CC-BY-SA-3.0
 
 OS X users can browse Keep read-only via WebDAV. Specific collections can also be accessed read-write via WebDAV.
 
-h3. Browsing Keep (read-only)
+h3. Browsing Keep in Finder (read-only)
 
-In Finder, use "Connect to Server..." under the "Go" menu and enter @https://collections.uuid_prefix.your.domain/@ in popup dialog. When prompted for credentials, put a valid Arvados token in the @Password@ field and anything in the Name field (it will be ignored by Arvados).
+In Finder, use "Connect to Server..." under the "Go" menu and enter @https://collections.ClusterID.example.com/@ in popup dialog. When prompted for credentials, enter username "arvados" and paste a valid Arvados token for the @Password@ field.
 
 This mount is read-only. Write support for the @/users/@ directory is planned for a future release.
 
 h3. Accessing a specific collection in Keep (read-write)
 
-In Finder, use "Connect to Server..." under the "Go" menu and enter @https://collections.uuid_prefix.your.domain/@ in popup dialog. When prompted for credentials, put a valid Arvados token in the @Password@ field and anything in the Name field (it will be ignored by Arvados).
+In Finder, use "Connect to Server..." under the "Go" menu and enter @https://collections.ClusterID.example.com/c=your-collection-uuid@ in popup dialog. When prompted for credentials, put a valid Arvados token in the @Password@ field and anything in the Name field (it will be ignored by Arvados).
 
 This collection is now accessible read/write.